外语日记怎么写( 七 )


下面三则学生日记供读者参考:Sun., Feb. 1OvercastThe night before the examinationThe clock struck eleven at night. The whole house was quiet. Everyone was in bed except me. Under the strong light, I looked gloomily before me at a huge pile of that disgusting stuff they call“books”.I was going to have my examination the next day. “Whencan I go to bed?” I asked myself. I did not answer. In fact I dared not.The clock struck 12.“Oh, dear!”I cried. “Ten more books to read before I can go to bed!”We students are the most wretched creatures in the world.考试是学生日记“永恒的主题”,写得真实有趣 。Mon., May 9ClearA watermelonGot a present of a watermelon cooled down in the well(在井里冷却过的)from my next-door neighbour. As I was very thirsty, enjoyed it very much. They say the watermelons have turned out very well this summer due to the dry weather.“邻居送西瓜”这样一件小事,充满生活乐趣 。
当然可以作为日记的材料 。文中有省略I的地方 。
Thurs ., Jan . 7Very fineA sunny dayI got up early today to watch the sunrise. While I waited for the sun to rise, I sat beside my window and thought of my future. Soon I will be a 。
8.英语日记怎么写英语日记一般记录某一天发生的事件,或者是自己感受最深的一件事,如一节课、一次郊游活动、一场晚会、一场体育比赛等等 。
也可是观看某场电影、电视剧或阅读某一篇文章后的体会等 。写英语日记要注意下面几点:
一、英语日记的格式
英语日记通常由两部分组成,即书端和正文 。
书端指写日记的日期、星期和天气 。英语日记的书端顶格写在正文上边的左边 。
先写星期,再写日期 。日期的写法与书信的相同 。天气可写在正文的右上方或写在日期之后 。
通常用形容词如Fine, Cloudy, Rainy, Windy, Foggy等 。
二、英语日记的时态
由于日记记载的事情通常已经发生过,谓语动词多用一般过去时态 。
三、写日记正文时应注意的问题
1. 考试中所给的话题作文通常把词数控制在100-120个单词 。
2. 主题要突出 。整篇日记要围绕一个主题来展开 。切忌面面俱到,记流水帐 。
因此,要精心选择内容,记下最有意义的、感受最深的内容 。
3. 语言表达要贴切 。写日记时,遣词造句要符合语法和英语习惯表达 。切忌汉语句式表达 。
如果我们不能用已学的语言知识来表达某种意思,最好换另一种同义的表达法 。
4. 注意结构的完整性 。在结尾要有结束语,用自己的感想或体会对前面的内容作总结 。
请看范文:
Wednesday July 20, 2005 Fine
I had an unforgettable trip to Cambridge today.
The weather was fine today. My classmates and I went on a guided trip to Cambridge by coach. It took us about three hours to get there.
As soon as we got there, we were divided into several groups, with a professional guide to show us around. First, we were shown the King's College, whose chapel (礼拜堂) impressed me most. It is the most spectacular (壮观的) building that I have ever seen. Then we visited other places such as Trinity College, and Fitzwilliam Museum. In the end, we walked along the Cambridge river and enjoyed the beautiful view.
Although tired, I spent the most exciting day in my life. I hope one day I can study in Cambridge University — my dream college.
9.请问用外语写日记的格式是怎样的呢英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成 。日记常以第一人称记下当天生活中的所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情 。中、英文的日记三格式大致一样 。英语日记的书端是专门写日记的日期、星期和天气的 。左上角是日期(年、月、日)、星期 。右上角写上当天的天气情况,如:Sunny, Fine, Rainy, Windy, Snowy, Cloudy等 。