地图英语作文怎么写呀( 二 ) _作文

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Now, I would like to talk about a Map .I am from BaoDing. When I go to school in Tianjin, I have to take bus because there is no train between these two cities .To get Tianjin, I should take the Jin-Bao high-speed bus , and get off the bus at ChenChang street, walk along ChenChang street about 8KM and turn left, then go ahead on GuangRong road and I will find the school on right.
The place next to our school is XiGu park and DingZiGu bus station. Sometimes, I go to BinJiang street for shopping . I often go to there by subway,because the HongHuLi subway station is just 500 meter away form our school . I exit from YingKouDao station later.
If you want buy some fried twist （麻花吧，可以说 bread twist 或者 fried twist） for your parents you can get off the subway at NanLou station.
Last week I took（这里应该用过去式，因为是last week） NO.855 bus at DingZiGu bus station and got off at the BaLiTai station, And I noticed （这里用notice比较好）the TianJin and NanKai university are right there.
Tianjing is so big that I just have been to few places (few places 在这里指的是没几个地方) And I wish I can travel all around Tianjin.
That's all,thank you!
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