级怎么写英文作文( 三 ) _英文

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考试时作文阅卷时间紧，且采用global scoring（整体评分）方法，因此阅卷老师不可能慢悠悠地欣赏你的大作。作文阅卷老师都是经验非常丰富的大学英语教师，他们要在数分钟内浏览完考生作文，给出评分意见。如何吸引阅卷老师的注意呢？我认为，一个完整框架是必不可少的，首先应让阅卷老师觉得你的文章是结构完整合理、符合要求的。换言之，即具备英语文章的基本要素：引言段、扩展段和结尾段。引言段中要包含thesis statement（中心句），扩展段的每段均应有topic sentence（主题句），结尾段应该是一个自然收尾的段落。中文讲究意合，而英语注意形合，要求句与句、段与段之间运用恰当的过渡词，把上下文有机地连接起来。因此，应适当运用关键词组、套句，以吸引阅卷老师的“眼球” 。
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8. 英语作文怎么写英语作文怎么写？相对于英语的其它题目，作文的综合要求可能更高一点，那么我们就以这次考试的作文为例子来讲讲英语作文怎么写. 首先我先说说同学们在做作文的时候常常遇到的问题，然后我再给出一个大概的解决方法，最后呢，我们联系这次考试的作文题来实战一番. 从我们题目的要求来看，是一个记事的记叙文，并且是一个看图说话类的，所有的素材都在我们的图片里面了.那么我们就要先把图片仔细的看一下，选好线索，显然图片里面的钟暗示我们选择时间为我们的叙事线索.其次要选择好一个时态的问题，我们可以以晚上回忆的方式来叙述这个事情。那么都是过去时。那么开头是一个比较困难的事情，大家也许不知道从何说起.这里我给出了一个例子. Our class had already planned to go to Handian Nursing Home to visit those old people living there . We were all eager to go there as soon as we can. And today this time really came, so you could image how happy we were. At about 8:00 in the morning , with tools in hands, we went out of our school towards the Handian Nursing Home 下面我们不必过多的描述在路上的情形，我们重点将描述在敬老院里面的情形. It was about 9:00 when we arrived there. Though we were a little tired, none of us wanted to have a rest. As some of those old people seldom came out, so some of us helped them walk around to breathe the fresh air. Some help them to wash their clothes, and the others swept the ground. Most of us never do such things at home, so we maybe didn't do these well, but we all tried our best. At about 11:55,we had lunch with them, and our monitor stood for us to bless them devoutly. During the lunch time, we were all very happy. After lunch, we had a party with those old people. Before we came here, we had already prepared some songs for them. As we expected, they all felt great pleased with our programs. Though maybe we didn't performed well, the smile on their faces made us very happy. 该到说再见的时候了，一定要注意收尾工作. Happy time always goes fast. Though we didn't notice that we had stayed here for a long time, the clock on the wall informed us clearly that it was time for us to go home. So we had to say good bye to those old people. On the way home, we all said this was really a significant day, and we decided to come back again whenever we had time.
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9. 如何写好英语三级B作文 1）我的书包My BackpackI have a backpack. It is large and it is blue. It is a birthday gift from my parents. I love it very much. It is very "hard-working", because I keep all my school things in it. It is very heavy. It is with all the time during school days. It is a good friend of mine.(2)我的房子My HouseI have a house. It is big and new. There are eight rooms in it. They are a living-room,a kitchen,three bedroom,one study and two bathrooms. I watch TV in the living-room. I do my homework in the study. I have dinner in the kitchen. This is my house. I like it.(3)今年暑假（This vacations） In this vacations Igo to travel in some famous places and i go to visit my grandparents in the village.i learn something difenrent.like example:Iknow people work in the village it is so hard and so tired,they are grow the vegetable,rice and something else it is very dificult.(4)小学的最后一个暑假（the last summer in my elementary school） the last summer in my elementary school is very unforgetable,i remember i will go to another school and have to leave my friends and teachers,i feel sad ,but i learned to get together with them to remember the friendship between us,we have a good time and swear to study hard in order to have a bright future.(5)今天的经历（Today's experience） It was a fine day today and the sun was bright . I visited Beijing Zoo with my classmate , Zhang Hong . The animals there were so interesting that allthe people loved them . When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys , I went ran to stop him and said ,“ Animals are our good friends and we must take good care of them .”(6)My DogI have a dog. My dog name is DuDu. DuDu is 9 years. DuDu is fat. It wears a white coat. DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears. It has one short mouth. My dog is smart. I like my dog. Do you like it?(7)My Good FriendZhang Ying is my good friend. She's in Class1, Grade4 of Tianjiao Primary School. She's a model student. She's clever and she's helpful, too. She often helps teachers and young students at school. She is good at Chinese, maths, English, arts and crafts, music and so on. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes painting and drawing. And she likes listening to music, having picnics with her parents. Oh yeah, she likes fishing, too. But she doesn't like playing basketball, football, table tennis or volleyball. Zhang Ying is the best friend of mine. I like playing with her. We always work together and help each other.(8)My new teacherMy new teacher is science teacher. He's very strong. He has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a not too big and not too small nose. He often wears a black new shirt and brown pants, with two big shoes 。