： We are pleased to offer you the position of sales director, and I am looking forward to our Tuesday morning meeting. 那么I和you呢？好烦好烦.一般来说，收信人的利益比较重要，名义上都要这样想.给人尊重的语气就一般不会错了. 多用you有时会有隔阂的感觉. You。
4.给外国人写邮件,在格式上应怎样如何写英文电子邮件 一、文法上 1、切忌主客不分或模糊 例子： Deciding to rescind the earlier estimate, our report was updated to include $40,000 for new equipment.” 应改为：Deciding to rescind our earlier estimate, we have updated our report to include $40,000 for new equipment. (We决定呀，不是report.) 2、句子不要凌碎 例子： He decided not to audit the last ten contracts. Because of our previous objections about compliance. 应该连在一起. 3、结构对称，令人容易理解. 例子： The owner questioned the occupant's lease intentions and the fact that the contract had been altered with ink markings. 应改为： The owner questioned the occupant's lease intentions and ink alterations of the contract. 4.单众数不要搞乱，不然会好刺眼，看不舒服. 例如： An authorized person must show that they have security clearance. 5.动词主词要呼应. 想想这两个分别： 1).This is one of the public-relations functions that is underbudgeted. 2). This。
如何写英文电子邮件 一、文法上 1、切忌主客不分或模糊 例子： Deciding to rescind the earlier estimate, our report was updated to include $40,000 for new equipment.” 应改为：Deciding to rescind our earlier estimate, we have updated our report to include $40,000 for new equipment. (We决定呀，不是report.) 2、句子不要凌碎 例子： He decided not to audit the last ten contracts. Because of our previous objections about compliance. 应该连在一起. 3、结构对称，令人容易理解. 例子： The owner questioned the occupant's lease intentions and the fact that the contract had been altered with ink markings. 应改为： The owner questioned the occupant's lease intentions and ink alterations of the contract. 4.单众数不要搞乱，不然会好刺眼，看不舒服. 例如： An authorized person must show that they have security clearance. 5.动词主词要呼应. 想想这两个分别： 1).This is one of the public-relations functions that is underbudgeted. 2). This is one of the public-relations functions, which are underbudgeted. 6.时态和语气不要转变太多.看商务英语已经是苦事，不要浪费人家的精力啊. 7.标点要准确. 例如： He did not make repairs, however, he continued to monitor the equipment. 改为： He did not make repairs; however, he continued to monitor the equipment. 8.选词正确. 好像affect和effect, operative和operational等等就要弄清楚才好用啦. 9.拼字正确. 有电脑拼字检查功能后，就更加不能偷懒. 10.大小写要注意.非必要不要整个字都是大写，除非要骂人 例如： MUST change to OS immediately. 外国人就觉得不礼貌和喝令人一样. 要强调的话，用底线，斜字，粗体就可以了. Form xxx to xxx 前面是写信人，后面收信人 。
5.英文邮件的正式格式是什么Dear xx,
Good day.
This is xx from xx .We are the supplier of xx. Glad to contact with you.
Enclosed is purchse order for your company, please kindly check it.
Any questions please kindly contact with me.
Thanks & Best Regards,
XX
一般注意事项：
1. 不要做缩写 。比如doesn't要写成does not
2. 文章开门见山，不用寒暄太多 。
3. 一定采用书面语言，比如收到写成receive，不用got
4. 不要在句尾轻易用感叹号，注意标点符号的使用 。逗号句号后面一定空格 。
5. 写完全文要写落款：sincerely加上逗号然后再在一行的开写上你的名字
6. 名字就是自己的英文名（如果对方已经知道你的英文名字）如果给陌生的外国人发邮件的话，就是名字的拼音 。比如张小明就是Xiaoming Zhang