美国留学生怎么写邀请函( 二 ) _邀请函

大体上就是这样，那个地方应写什麽我都教你了，自己改一下吧
6.来自美国的交换留学生Linda要回国了Dear students,
Linda, the exchange student in our class will go back to her own country. We are planning to have a good weekend with her, and we want to invite all of you to attend it. We will meet at the school gate at 8 O'clock this Saturday. Then we will go to Yizheng Musuem by taxi at fifteen past eight, where we can see some old photos and learn about the history of Yizheng. After that we will go to Yangzi Park on foot. We can go boating there. At 12 O'clock we will have lunch at KFC. In the afternoon, we will go shopping on Walking Street on foot. At half past 4, we will go back to school by bus and then go home by bike. Everyone should remember to take 100 yuan to attend this activity.
Yours,
Lily
试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，让我们根据所给材料写一封邀请信，邀请全班同学参加一个活动，和Linda 一起度过一个周末。材料中有详细的时间及活动安排，我们要用正确的时态按照时间顺序把这一天的行程表达清楚。通过分析可知，本篇短文应主要用一般将来时，第一人称复数表达。写作时注意行文连贯，表达清楚，不要遗漏要点。并且多使用好的短语和句型以使文章流畅。
【亮点说明】这篇作文写得比较清楚，详细，对材料中的时间及活动安排表达的很清楚，并且按时间顺序交代了这一天的行程。写作的人称和时态都切合题意。并且文中也用了一些较好的句型，如where we can see some old photos and learn about the history of Yizheng、go boating 、go shopping、Everyone should remember to take等。这些句型的使用使文章流畅，富有条理。

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