ps的开头一般怎么写

1.美国留学文书PS开头要怎么写一、美国留学PS开头--重复简历型
I earned my Bachelor of Science degree in … Sciences with a specialization in
… in 2002 at … university
点评:美国留学ps不要去重复简历中的东西 , 这在很多学校的PS要求中明确提到 , 个人陈述的写作要具体到事件上 , 事件解决上 , 而不要单纯重复已有的内容 。
二、美国留学PS开头--学校介绍型
I am an undergraduate in…University , the largest university anda cradle of
scientific and technological talents in China.
点评:该同学的ps开头等于是一个申请学校的简介 , 这好像是在帮助学校做宣传 , 或表达你有多了解该学校 , 而不是写个人陈述了 。这是没有意义的开头 , 白白浪费了字数 , 最容易被秒据掉 。
三、美国留学PS开头--抄袭句式型
As a student majoring in Computer Science, I began my odyssey since I entered
undergraduate program. Indeed, having entered this splendid computer world, I am
more than greedy for something new.
点评:Odyssey 和more than greedy for something new
这种句式不知道是从哪里学到的 , 很多同学在用 。但你要知道 , 老外最恨抄袭 , 最喜原创 , 所以利害关系大家想想吧 。
四、美国留学PS开头--救世主型
I am a problem solver. I have an impulse as a kind of instincts to
solvevarious problems before me and enjoy doing that. Since I was a little boy,
a voice from President Franklin Roosevelt has constantly hovered around my mind,
"The world can be changed by man''s endeavor ,  …
点评:一副救世主的形象 , 小时候就受富兰克林的影响 , 立志改变世界 。ps的写作一定要个人化具体化 , 别吹大牛 , 甚至带着一种霸权主义思维 。
2.美国留学文书PS开头要怎么写一、美国留学PS开头--重复简历型I earned my Bachelor of Science degree in … Sciences with a specialization in … in 2002 at … university点评:美国留学ps不要去重复简历中的东西 , 这在很多学校的PS要求中明确提到 , 个人陈述的写作要具体到事件上 , 事件解决上 , 而不要单纯重复已有的内容 。
二、美国留学PS开头--学校介绍型I am an undergraduate in…University , the largest university anda cradle of scientific and technological talents in China.点评:该同学的ps开头等于是一个申请学校的简介 , 这好像是在帮助学校做宣传 , 或表达你有多了解该学校 , 而不是写个人陈述了 。这是没有意义的开头 , 白白浪费了字数 , 最容易被秒据掉 。
三、美国留学PS开头--抄袭句式型As a student majoring in Computer Science, I began my odyssey since I entered undergraduate program. Indeed, having entered this splendid computer world, I am more than greedy for something new.点评:Odyssey 和more than greedy for something new 这种句式不知道是从哪里学到的 , 很多同学在用 。但你要知道 , 老外最恨抄袭 , 最喜原创 , 所以利害关系大家想想吧 。
四、美国留学PS开头--救世主型I am a problem solver. I have an impulse as a kind of instincts to solvevarious problems before me and enjoy doing that. Since I was a little boy, a voice from President Franklin Roosevelt has constantly hovered around my mind, "The world can be changed by man''s endeavor ,  …点评:一副救世主的形象 , 小时候就受富兰克林的影响 , 立志改变世界 。ps的写作一定要个人化具体化 , 别吹大牛 , 甚至带着一种霸权主义思维 。