1. 这个英语文章的总结要怎么写 250左右 A recent study shows that dirt may be good for brain and make children smarter because it is a
natural anti-anxiety drug without side-effects. Dr. Dorothy Matthews, an associate professor of biology at The Sage Colleges in Troy, N.Y.,conducted the experiment. She and her colleagues tested how long the mice took to navigate a maze. The result is that the bacteria-exposed mice ran twice as fast as the controls. Their explanation is like this: Serotonin plays a big role in modulating mood, decreasing anxiety. If one is nervous or frightened, he can't think straight. So serotonin is of significance for learning. In the experiment, the bacteria-exposed mice showed fewer anxiety behaviors than the non-exposed ones. In another experiment, the researchers removed the bacteria from the food provided for the exposed mice and found that those exposed mice were still faster than the controls. Therefore, they came to a conclusion thatthe effect is temporary.(字数:155,实际已经说清楚了 。)
2. 英语文章的总结应注意什么 句子、词语 。
文章由句子组成,句子由词语组成 。在着手写文章之前,应该提醒自己注意下面几点 1)句子与词语的正确用法 。
这是最基本的一点 。这里包括单字的正确拼写、词语在特定句子中的正确应用、正确的句子模式 。
注意:千万不要在文章中出现中国式的英语 。这就要求在构思的时候不要用中文进行思考,写的时候要仔细斟酌文章的语句 。
2)句子的多样化 。这点的实现必须在句子与词语的正确上来实现 。
句子的多样化是体现一个人英语语言水平的关键也是使文章获得高分的重点 。如非谓语从句、定语从句、宾语从句等,以及简单句、复杂句的综合使用 。
3)标点的正确使用 文章的整体风格与气氛 。作为考官或者是阅读你文章的人,在第一次接触到你文章时就可以感受到文章的特点与风格,或者活泼或者呆板,而依据模板写的文章很难做到活泼或者是吸引读者 。
保持书写的工整性与字迹 常见错误提醒一.不一致(disagreements) 所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致,它还包括了数的不一致时态不一致及代词不一致等. 例1. when one have money ,he can do what he want to . (人一旦有了钱,他就能想干什么就干什么.) 剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have应改为has ;同理,want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致. 改为:once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do) 二.修饰语错位(misplaced modifiers) 英语与汉语不同,同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置,句子的含义可能引起变化.对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视,因而造成了不必要的误解.例1. i believe i can do it well and i will better know the world outside the campus. 剖析:better位置不当,应置于句末. 三.句子不完整(sentence fragments) 在口语中,交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等,不完整的句子完全可以被理解.可是书面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清,这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后,笔者又想加些补充说明时发生. 例1. there are many ways to know the society. for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so on . 剖析:本句后半部分"for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句.改为:there are many ways to know society ,for example ,by tv ,radio ,and newspaper. 四.悬垂修饰语(dangling modifiers) 所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清.例如:at the age of ten, my grandfather died.这句中"at the age of ten"只点出十岁时,但没有说明”谁”十岁时.按一般推理不可能是my grandfather,如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点,全句就不那么费解了.改为: when i was ten, my grandfather died. 例1. to do well in college, good grades are essential.剖析:句中不定式短语“to do well in college”的逻辑主语不清楚. 改为: to do well in college, a student needs good grades.五.词性误用(misuse of parts of speech) “词性误用”常表现为:介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等.例1. none can negative the importance of money. 剖析:negative系形容词,误作动词 。改为: none can deny the importance of money. 六.指代不清(ambiguous reference of pronouns) 指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清,或者先后所用的代词不一致 。